Admiral Ackbar's speech

Why: Admiral Ackbar repeats the phrase, “the forest moon of Endor,” one too many times during his speech. One explanation of it is enough.

How: Instead of him saying “It is protected by an energy shield which is generated from the nearby forest moon of Endor,” have him say something like “…which is generated from the forest moon.” This should be an easy modification because his lip movements don’t match what he’s saying in the first place.

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