Anakin and Padmé’s last words

Why: I thought most of the final conversation between Anakin and Padmé was pretty nice, only Anakin needs to get a little angrier at the end, angry enough to choke her. Some smoothing out of the conversation could also be done.

How: After Anakin says, “Obi-Wan is trying to turn you against me,” I personally would add a quick, “Why would he do that?” by Padmé just before her next line. Somehow it makes it a little smoother.

As for Anakin’s rage, it’s shown as being fuelled by Obi-Wan’s appearance; however, for him to totally jump from one state to another, extreme state needs to be done a bit differently. He should already be a bit angry before seeing Obi-Wan. I think this could be done by replacing Anakin’s line, “Because of Obi-Wan…” with the same line but said in a different tone, one with more anger in his voice.

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