The word "master"

Why: Anakin repeats the word “master” toooo many times when they’re standing outside of the Outlander Club. Take a few of them out.

How: It could go something like this:
ANAKIN: She went into the club.

OBI-WAN: Patience, use the Force, think.

ANAKIN: Sorry, master.

OBI-WAN: He went in there to hide, not to run.

ANAKIN: Yes, master.

OBI-WAN: Next time try not to lose it.

Before ANAKIN can grab the saber, OBI-WAN pulls it back.

OBI-WAN: This weapon is your life.

ANAKIN: I try.

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