Why: Anakin uses the word “
oops” just too many times in the film and that makes the destruction of the droid control ship look like a total accident. Removing a few of these would make the movie a little more believable.
How: When he lands inside the hangar, replace “
Oops, this is not good”, with either, “
This is not good,” or, “
Uh-oh, this is not good,” because it makes more sense.
When he fires the torpedoes and hits the generator, take out the “
Oops” or replace it with something like, “
R2, look! I think we did it!”
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