Dialogue inside the ray shields = horrible

Why: When Anakin, Obi-Wan, and Palpatine get caught inside the ray-shields, the dialogue that follows is horrific. Here’s how is goes:
ANAKIN: Ray shields!

OBI-WAN: Wait a minute, how did this happen? We’re smarter than this!

ANAKIN: Apparently not. I say patience.

OBI-WAN: Patience?

ANAKIN: Yes, Artoo will be along in a few moments and then he’ll release the ray shields.
I highly suggest this be modified to sound better…for the sake of the saga’s dignity!

How: Quite simple:
ANAKIN: Ray shields!

OBI-WAN: Now what?

ANAKIN: I say patience.

OBI-WAN: Patience?

ANAKIN: Yes, Artoo will be along in a few moments and then he’ll release the ray shields.

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