"Or be with the people that I love"

Why: Not, this line…no! When I heard this line in the theater, I felt embarrassed that I brought some of my non-Star Wars fan friends with me because I knew what was going through their minds at that time. I think I lost a lot of respect because of that single line. Please, change it!

How: Put anything in its place, for example, “I’ve gotten used to it. It’s only hard when I want to be with people that I love.

1 comment:

  1. In principle I don't have a problem the line itself. If he delivered it in a manner that was less intense, less obviously leading, more throwaway, like he might be referring to his mother - then it would work.