Padmé’s fall

Why: When Padmé falls off the gunship, Anakin yells out to her and tells the pilot to put the ship down, after which Obi-Wan says, “Don’t let your personal feelings get in the way!” This line is very cliché and doesn’t suit the situation very well. It’s more of a general thing someone would say, so I would change it.

How: Change it to something like, “Catching Count Dooku is our priority now.

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