Ship falling apart

Why: For some reason, when the ship breaks into two pieces, you don’t really feel it. The sound of it breaking up is just too quiet and not sharp enough. I mean this is a huge ship, and it splitting into two pieces would make a huge noise. I think it needs to have more emphasis so it doesn’t look like an everyday thing, like it does now.

How: Make the sound when it breaks apart a lot sharper and louder. Also, it would be a good idea to hear a breaking noise, like the hull cracking and breaking off just before Anakin says, “We lost something.” This would also explain why he looks back as he says it, and eliminate a brief moment of silence that doesn’t feel like it belongs there.

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