"What about mom?"

Why: When Anakin learns that he has been freed and that his life is about to totally change, he is understandably excited about it, however his reaction to his mother staying behind did not come across as believable or realistic.

How: Instead of having him ask, "What about mom? Is she free too?" have him say something along the lines of, "Mom is coming with us too, right?" as if throughout the conversation this is what he automatically assumed.

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