"You're going to kill him, aren't you?"

Why: I think this line spoken by Padmé to Obi-Wan is a little too "raw" because it uses the word “kill.” For some reason, that word in particular makes the sentence not sound right.

How: Replace the line with something like, “IDEAS NEEDED,” or, even better, remove the line so that it appears that Padmé just looks at Obi-Wan, reading his face, knowing exactly why he wants to find him. Obi-Wan’s next line will show that he knows that she knows what he’s thinking and is sort of an explanation to her for his intended actions.