"It makes me feel uncomfortable"

Why: I thought the whole segment of Padmé complaining to Anakin about him looking at her and all that was a bit too awkward, especially the statement, “It makes me feel uncomfortable,” which seemed a bit too brutal as a reply, and made the audience feel uncomfortable. I didn’t really notice him actually “looking” at her in any particular way to make her say something like that.

How: Replace the line with something like, “I’m just not used to it.” This wouldn’t look as rude when she walks away, and it also justifies Anakin’s smile…because now he knows she’s available.

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