Why: I think it would be much more informative to the viewer if it’s shown what the Jedi and the politicians were talking about before Obi-Wan’s message interrupted their meeting. It’s obviously supposed to be a meeting to discuss the discovery of the clone army, which, if shown to the viewer, would explain how Palpatine and the others knew about its existence.
I also feel the need to add a bit more information to Obi-Wan’s message to suggest more clearly that there is a huge army of droids on Geonosis.
How: Before Obi-Wan’s message appears, have someone say a few words regarding the discovery of the clones. Obi-Wan’s message can be fixed up by adding the word “enormous” when he’s talking about how they are to take order of the droid army.
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